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7月28日托福独立写作真题范文 | 功课减负, 高兴幼年!

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7月28日托福独立写作真题范文 | 功课减负, 高兴幼年!

2019年7月28日独立写作标题:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

Primary school students (aged 5-10) should do no more than 30 minutes of homework per night because they already get enough instructions at school during the day.

【思路】

“够了”。

1. 孩子的脑子敷衍不了太多功课;

2. 不能让作业冲击孩子的学习爱好和志愿;

3. 教师也敷衍不来那么多要修改的作业吧。

【Introduction】

1. 我在评论什么(论题)。

2. 我在这个论题中的态度是什么。

到达这两个意图就好,不要冗长磨蹭。

写作范文来啦!

第 1 段

Although homework is necessary as it is to make sure that child students revisit things taught in the class, the load should be within a small amount. The proposition that the amount should not exceed 30 minutes of work is logical and adoptable.

第 2 段

First, a child’s mind is unable to deal with homework that takes a long time. [接下来,要么会解说,要么会举例,要么一起解说和举例。假如一起解说和举例,没有肯定先后顺序。就这个点而言,用解说去证明更佳。]Children usually have short attent7月28日托福独立写作真题范文 | 功课减负, 高兴幼年!ion spans. If the assignments require a long span of focus, children will get absent-minded and, as a result, learn nothing. In addition, although children may be forced to concentrate and manage to do so, they will get tired, and fatigue does not promote learning and instead inhibits it. [接下来举比如么?其实能够不举例,由于解说够清楚了。]

第 3 段

Homework is not to make children suffer but to encourage children to experience what they learn. If the load is heavy and the time is lengthy, child students’ interest in learning7月28日托福独立写作真题范文 | 功课减负, 高兴幼年! and patience will wear thin and eventually wear off. For instance, [完全能够叙述个人经历,别编纂Tom仍是Jerry。] when I was in the elementary school, the math teacher always assigned too much homework to the students. As a matter of fact, the large amounts were not useful in strengthening my numeracy skills but counterproductive. Doing the work was like a torture, and with my interest in the subject lost soon, I failed in math. In fact, I have since been7月28日托福独立写作真题范文 | 功课减负, 高兴幼年! weak in counting and calculating.

【第三点,此处略。咱们换用互动的方法来:有心的读者能够把自己的写作测验发在留言区,作者会去给出点评。】

第 4 段

There is no denying that homework is necessary because child students need to reflect on their learning—the successes and deficiencies—during the day. However, the amount must be reasonable and small, and the length of 30 minutes may be just fine.

▲ Conclusion能够是introduction的改写。

▲ 不要过火重复主体部分现已陈说到很清楚详尽的内容。阿童木

▲ 总的说来,防止冗长磨蹭。

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